Tuesday, December 15, 2009

Human Wall

Busy feet walking
Ideas are overflowing
Voices seem greeting
Unsure whether smiling

Fingers on keypad
Some faces look sad
Coy as a child
But many have grown wild

Fat and thin
Forever be seen
Young and old
Their stories unfold

Weary and dusty
Wandering so freely
In a corner a fashionista
A distant sight a rasta

Mortals are unique
Some are crooked and oblique
Life scripts always will be
A choice of you and me

20 comments:

Will said...

great stuff. I'd love to have you write on my site. I'll create a free page for you to add whatever you want to. You're writing is outstanding, you need to share it. Let me know.

Will
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anneberly said...

poem for bloggers.. Nice. Thnaks for the visit
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treen said...

nice poem. just visiting here.

esularte said...

very nice poetry...keep it up!

BeverLy's Secret said...

beautifully written..
like it :)

p/s: Thanks for visiting!!

Dream said...

that is very nice post. i love it ..
Busy feet walking
Ideas are overflowing
Voices seem greeting
Unsure whether smiling

Fat and thin
Forever be seen
Young and old
Their stories unfold


is really nice poem..

Gerald Galindez said...

~_^ decent poem here... keep up the good work..

Tey said...

this is new? I thought it was but I have read this before but thanks for the visit anyway. Have a great day to you my friend
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Cheddarina said...

Very nice poems u have. Good writing skill. And thanks for visiting me

Tey said...

I have a tag for you on my blogs about how do you make money online. Please grab it and join the fun. Have a great day
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Tey said...

i wonder when will do an update on this blog bhobwie..lols
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Cheddarina said...

Nice poem.... Ur writing is really good.

bhobwire said...

i really have been busy with work. sorry. :D i have to find where my old poems are still kept. but thank you everybody for your nice comments.

Tey said...

passing by here
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terror said...

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monica said...

you're poems are really good. Love this one in particular, wow, how long does it take to compose such as this?

hbncrc said...

nice post dude... you have a great creativity
hbncrc

anneberly said...

Have a great weekdn bhob Beyond The Rave Reality, Computer and Electronics, Money Online Thoughts, Seek Health. Feel Great

Tey said...

I was here from my other 4 blogs. Thanks for the visit and hope to see new update here soon
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anneberly said...

o new update still?
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